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The line read:
"Fallow your heart",
I wondered what more there was to say.

Fallow your heart, leave it
empty and waiting for a season
so love can grow, nourished,
in a replenished, whole ground.
Fallow your heart so it does not become
Worn and barren with overuse.

The line read "fallow your heart",
but the poem, overworked,
meant only "follow".

Please remember that spelling counts.
true story.
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ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
This is a quite smart little punpoem. Congrats on the DD.
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner May 27, 2012   Writer
:+fav: I'm glad you could do something with such a spelling. You did a fine job and wrapped it in truth. Thank you.
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MissNoko Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
It was deep until the realization that it was a misspelling. :'D
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ACrowsCollection Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
haha, this is brilliant! =)
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FRBRkitty Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Thank you! :)
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Monopolycat Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
It's just beautiful. Great piece of poetry.
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FRBRkitty Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Thanks
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Dear God, yes.
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FRBRkitty Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
:)
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ichigonyaa Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
Brilliant!
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