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Matchbook poetry-
pre-rain jitters
and stippled walls-
gently jetting ideas
into empty space…
We should start again,
but your beat's put me off my rhythm.
pre-rain jitters
and stippled walls-
gently jetting ideas
into empty space…
We should start again,
but your beat's put me off my rhythm.
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Six Word Story
my mother kept smiles in bottles
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SW: To Whom it May Concern
Prince on vacation.
Rescued myself.
- Princess
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Manifest
Ah, me leg,
I shall miss ye,
Latest of the lost.
Aye, ye be Davy
Jones' lass now,
Me pretty, me foot.
Gone
Fer a chain shot
While I were topgallant.
With me left hand
Now,
And me parrot Jim,
And much o'
The lee side o' me face.
I list a bit now,
An' I've lost me sea leg,
So I'm thinkin' now's time
To leave the Pirate
Round an' head for Barbary Coast
With me coffers t' find the
pretty lass I knew when I was
But a wee thing.
If she'll still take me,
Perhaps I won't even miss the sea.
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...no one should let me scribble in coffee shops. I write this.
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Well, I'd drop the "..." and remove the embarrassing apostrophe from "beats," but I think this is a gem worth saving and improving upon.
Its images are novel and they work together in an interesting if hard-to-explain way.
I say it's a keeper, maybe due for some revision.
Its images are novel and they work together in an interesting if hard-to-explain way.
I say it's a keeper, maybe due for some revision.